Goodness, you did a number on the English Language
First of all, the story makes no sense, namely because I can't even figure out what the story is. A girl in a swimsuit asks me some incoherent question, I randomly choose a password then I go to some bar were each option ends my game.....wow, a masterpiece if I ever saw one. Phrases like "I don't think i have the choose...than lets go" or "It hard like it (steal the member card)" make NO SENSE, fix that! That "music" is veeeeeeery irritating, over and over and over and over irritating clicking noises, scrap that too. Also-you know what just scrap the whole thing.